Could this deck win a local tournament Rate/Fix?

• By Cali Shaye
• Growing Marijuana
• 13 years ago
• 2

Please Rate This deck and give some suggestions on how I could improve it

Monsters:22
2 King Tiger Wanghu
2 X-saber Airbellum
2 Breaker
2 Krebons
2 Marauding Captain
2 Caius The Shadow Monarch
1 Rescue Cat
1 Sangan
1 Summoner Monk
1 DD Assailant
1 DD Warrior Lady
1 Exiled Force
1 GB Samnite( Helps for an instant lvl 6 if I pull cat without him or both airbellums already used)
1 The Tricky
1 Hyper Synchron (Works with summoner monk but limits my options would Rather have a Rose)
1 Don Zaloog

Spells16
3 Book of Moon
2 Enemy Controller
1 MST
1 RoTA
1 Mind Control
1 Brain Control
1 Smashing Ground
1 Swords
1 Fissure
1 Vortex
1 Trunade
1 Heavy
1 Pot of Avarice

Traps:7
2 Reckless
1 7 tools
1 COH
1 Ceasefire
1 BTH
1 CED (Compulsory Evac)

Synchros:10
2 Collosal Fighter
1 Thought Ruler Archfeind
1 Stardust Dragon
1 Black Rose Dragon
1 Ancient Fairy Dragon
2 Psychic Life
1 Iron Chain
1 Gia Knight

Side:14
2 Brain Golem
1 Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke
1 Grandmole
1 GB Hunter
1 Crystal Seer
1 Junk Synchron
2 Mirror of Oaths
1 Barrel Behind the Door
2 Spell of pain
1 Shrink
1 Coffin Seller

so anyway ell me how you think this deck could improve and how you would rate it
No Black Rose Is at One I’M Not a Noob don’t try to give me that. By the way here’s my source http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/September_2009_Lists