I used to be big on Yugioh, and I was really good, I did tournaments and everything. I haven’t played in a few years so I don’t know any of these cards, but here’s what I remember:

–Keep your deck small- yours seems big and seems like it has a lot of cards you don’t need. Edit it

–You should have more monsters than your traps and spells, and limit the amount of intense monsters you have. The little ones always got me a good start

–Use cards that compliment each other, as in ones that go together. Or have a plan on how you will pair certain ones up. This is supported by the keep it small rule.

–Lastly, theme decks are fun, but be careful- I remember having about 10 different theme decks. Those decks always lost. If you are planning on playing for a win, make a mix deck.

Sorry my answer isn’t specific to answering about the certain cards you have, but I hope what I wrote will help.

What the hell!!!!
You run multiples of four? Since when was this legal. On top of this being illegal even if it was legal, it is still very weak. Try running 20 monsters, 10 spells, 10 traps. Then update on the ban/limited lists. If you run tributes, no more than six please for your own good. Not much more i can expand on right now…. Pretty bad deck…. so I’m gonna end now.

not the best in the world. sorry. your running darks so obviously use 2 allur of darkness and 1 dark armed dragon. take out 1 odisen dragon you can only have 3 max. thats all i can think of. try keeping your deck to a 40 card max. 20 monsters 10 – 15 spell and the rest traps. traps for a dark deck afre like this:
3 solemn judgment
2 pheonix wing wind blast
1 crush card virus

make sure you use 3 mystic tomato since it is for a dark deck. if this were my dck i would take out everything and just add in good cards. i hope this helps.